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The story goes good then… sex… the story is back… then sex…. He’s injured… sex…. Development in the relationship but not a relationship at all yet… sex. WHY IS THERE SO MUCH?? I know it’s a Yaoi but you can have a good fair share of story and sex. Also the relationship feels a bit forced? I don’t know, it feels off. There’s not a lot to give off of it at all just that they care for one another because “he’s a good Soul” #－.－)
But hopefully this progresses more throughly… I have hope… (￣ε(#￣)Σ
P.S. Yes I know it’s yaoi and that is inevitable. What I mean by this post was that overall the build up of the relationship is very weird, and which makes the sex scenes feel quite puzzling. Of course it isn’t a lot of sex I was just being dramatic! Drugging him and using ‘chains/handcuffs(?)’ is pushing the bar for romantic. So when I saw it, I just think, oh!, and then I express it so if any others read they could see the review I gave of it. I stick to more story build up rather than straight sex. So my opinion is invalid of all ways! I just wanted to express my opinion! Thank you (≧∀≦)
“The greed, it sickens me” (≧∀≦)
This has lesser s3x scenes than most tho
Bro, you`ve not seen much then! there´s stories with basically nothing but "fwop fwop" each freakin ch! now this is mild on the s*x scenes I´d say
I know such exists it just feels very weird with how they were laid out is what I mean! Like when he chained him to get answers but still forgave him is very.. something! But that’s just my opinion (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Yes I know! I just meant it felt weird to read from the way it was set out (￣∇￣") but of course that’s how yaoi/BL are most of the time so I’ll deal with it, I just personally would like lore is all I meant with me comment!
i guess u could say their relationship is…off track
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I understand what you mean, I didn´t even remember the handcuff scene.. but yeah, yaoi logic doesn´t always logic very much
Btw thought your pp was Tata first
how mean :(
Womp womp #－.－)
oh who is youu
That’s so bizarre that the mother didn’t say it but her new husband had to talk it out with her own son… like dude… (︶︿︶)＝凸