The story goes good then… sex… the story is back… then sex…. He’s injured… sex…. Development in the relationship but not a relationship at all yet… sex. WHY IS THERE SO MUCH?? I know it’s a Yaoi but you can have a good fair share of story and sex. Also the relationship feels a bit forced? I don’t know, it feels off. There’s not a lot to give off of it at all just that they care for one another because “he’s a good Soul” #－.－)
But hopefully this progresses more throughly… I have hope… (￣ε(#￣)Σ
P.S. Yes I know it’s yaoi and that is inevitable. What I mean by this post was that overall the build up of the relationship is very weird, and which makes the sex scenes feel quite puzzling. Of course it isn’t a lot of sex I was just being dramatic! Drugging him and using ‘chains/handcuffs(?)’ is pushing the bar for romantic. So when I saw it, I just think, oh!, and then I express it so if any others read they could see the review I gave of it. I stick to more story build up rather than straight sex. So my opinion is invalid of all ways! I just wanted to express my opinion! Thank you (≧∀≦)
“The greed, it sickens me” (≧∀≦)
This has lesser s3x scenes than most tho
Bro, you`ve not seen much then! there´s stories with basically nothing but "fwop fwop" each freakin ch! now this is mild on the s*x scenes I´d say
I know such exists it just feels very weird with how they were laid out is what I mean! Like when he chained him to get answers but still forgave him is very.. something! But that’s just my opinion (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Yes I know! I just meant it felt weird to read from the way it was set out (￣∇￣") but of course that’s how yaoi/BL are most of the time so I’ll deal with it, I just personally would like lore is all I meant with me comment!
i guess u could say their relationship is…off track
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I understand what you mean, I didn´t even remember the handcuff scene.. but yeah, yaoi logic doesn´t always logic very much
Btw thought your pp was Tata first
how mean :(
Womp womp #－.－)
oh who is youu
This one low-key had me on edge the whole time, the lineup is a bit puzzling at first with the ages but luckily it’s not forced (despite the world of fate doing that job) but overall it’s so good with the plot. The beginning is hard to get through but once you make it past that, it’s good. Plus it may not be tooooo much romance but that’s fine because the lore is very interesting! I had my hair falling out though with all the misunderstanding, fights, decisions, and etc though.. but I’m so seated in my bed to see what will go on next ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
No cause this BL made me scream, embarrassed, interested, sat in my seat, worried and every emotion you can think of. Like how the hell was I sat reading all of this and so into it… Σ( ￣□￣||)
Like at first it’s like how is this going to turn into a relationship?? And the development was actually so smooth that you don’t even question it, it was so raw of emotion at some parts. Plus the MC/bottom stuck up for himself despite being anxious and they both told each other there problems?! Hello!! Literally so sweet (T0T)/
10/10 guys
Im obsessed with this BL. It’s so healthy, silly, fun and just so so cute and actually romantic and not full of unnecessary things (≧∀≦) Absolutely Adore!! We need more BL’s like this!!
The day I see the next volume come out is the day Im the happiest person on earth, I want the boys back
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The way I would be stuck in jail my whole life
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I am so glad the black hair love interest won, I didn’t care about anything else I just needed him to win his heart. Even though it’s rushed and I hoped for more of an ending, I'm still glad it ended the way I hoped it would despite all the frustration and annoyance from the triangles. It was a whole square at some point. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I KNEW IT. He did love him I knew it, there’s no way he’s lying when he saved him, got on his knees pleading for him not to die, and said he wanted to be selfish and be with him. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Omg first blushing???? Now that is a wonderful sight to see!! (●'◡'●)
That’s so bizarre that the mother didn’t say it but her new husband had to talk it out with her own son… like dude… (︶︿︶)＝凸