The story and art style show real promise but everything else unfortunately falls short. The world building could be great but there is no explanation around anything, one has to figure everything out themselves while reading, e.g. Knights having a “World” and how it correlates to their power. Scenes are just cut short, leaving conversations open ended with no resolution for the reader. The story just jumps from highlight to highlight. At times it feels like reading an old story which only focuses on the heroic actions and none of the personality or relationship building around it. I also suspect the writer heavily uses ChatGPT because these long ass sections around “blinding light” are way too often and often make no sense. The way it is structured makes it obvious that AI is being used. Too bad, I tried reading most of it but I just feel too frustrated to continue, no explanations no nothing. It’s just dumb.
I‘m not going to read one more chapter until the comment section is not covered in fluff. I’ve already been traumatized enough after seeing adorable Mori in that prison cell
I thought he was the young annoying looking guy that the 3 mercenaries saved. Why does he look so much older?? am I getting the wrong person bubbleTa
His hair turned white from the stress that same night lmao was brown one moment then Eren showed them who he was and it was all white the next panel LMAO
His hair turned white from the stress that same night lmao was brown one moment then Eren showed them who he was and it was all white the next panel LMAO mama d
LMFAOOO I THOUGHT I WAS TWEAKING WHEN I SAW THAT PANEL
I had hoped they would change the original storyline in this case, but they chose to keep this dumb Ying Yang thing. I really enjoyed reading this but will drop this now since it seems it will only go downhill from here on out.
The story and art style show real promise but everything else unfortunately falls short. The world building could be great but there is no explanation around anything, one has to figure everything out themselves while reading, e.g. Knights having a “World” and how it correlates to their power. Scenes are just cut short, leaving conversations open ended with no resolution for the reader. The story just jumps from highlight to highlight. At times it feels like reading an old story which only focuses on the heroic actions and none of the personality or relationship building around it. I also suspect the writer heavily uses ChatGPT because these long ass sections around “blinding light” are way too often and often make no sense. The way it is structured makes it obvious that AI is being used. Too bad, I tried reading most of it but I just feel too frustrated to continue, no explanations no nothing. It’s just dumb.