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bro idk if its js me but i think that the story would be 10x better if dan was the mean one, think bout it. Dan has every right to angry and upset about his life like he dont even know where tf is parents are(idk if they dead but) and grandma is fighting on life support. i feel like the story should be like “dan hate jjk because he doesn’t think he all that..but despite hating he needs to make money so he works for him..” and so on and on jjk would be the nice one and not a fucking asshole. i also feel like the sex should have come up in later chapters instead of being in chapter 2 bc i feel that just ruined the book, also the load sharks is also unnecessary to me like the bitch is already poor as shit why make it worst and plus it was only mentioned in one chap?. AND B4 YALL START COMING AT MY NECK THIS IS JUST A OPINION THING i really liked the plot of the story and i thought it would be different bc yk a “doctor” and an wrestler but at the end ig it just like any other book. also probably an unpopular opinion but kim dan should js kill himself or maybe just let his grandma go