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Why are the "good people" always so dumb. You see a stranger in your home who says to be the crown prince's servant, you dont check it, dont have the tea tasted... and just drink/let your master drink whatever they give you?
that's like the oldest trick in the book, atp the MC dying is just skill issue lol you can't say a character is smart and then have them fall for this
also, is it just me, or the pacing is weird?