beta
The plot is good, the story is interesting, and the maiden and Kondou are both believable. She annoyed the shit out of me at first but her being written as she is - it is good thing. She essentially is a kid that wants to go back home and I hope they do find a way to send her back. I feel like Kondou was very compassionate toward her in his own way, which is cool. I liked Areshi slowly changing when Kondou airs him out about not actually knowing shit anout finances, too. Like, yas, upgrade for your man