
Feels like this story has lost its identity... his goal. Hm...

Someonw mentioned that the finding shuhanan/talking to him arc went by too fast. I think that's maybe what I might be feeling is off. Like the part where he finally meets him, it gets resolved in like... 1 chapters. In the next chapter they're all hunky dory. And the chapter after that (I think), he's like. Ok, psyche. I'm out.
It's just a bit fast paced suddenly.
I don't know... personally not a fan of him making his old self again in the game, instead of making it as his current form. He comes across as a.. I don't know the word... narcissist?
It would have been interesting to see him navigate this player-based world as an npc-only instead. Helping his old friends in the game... that sort of thing.
A shame... I think I'll come back to this once it has many more chapters...