 
														I'm sorry, but honestly the second couple shouldn't have the spotlight now. It is a very important moment for Yuki and, although surely in the next chapter they will describe their feelings, Cutting the scene like this and move on to the other couple... I don't know, I'm not very happy, besides it was something we were waiting for. I know this manga is a fluffy story and all, and I don't expect smut, but again, cutting the scene like that...
 
																				
                                                Yes, I mean there were a lot of things they could have done. How to narrate what Yuki was thinking while everything was happening. Have a scene where they communicate with each other through signs to see if she was okay or comfortable. Or something else if they didn't want to show the explicit scene...
 I don't know... I honestly don't feel that the second couple is that relevant. 
The girl's character seems rather superficial to me...                                            
 
														So Dan goes to that west beach, gaze at the sunset with granny. She passes. Then since is a little town by the side and a place where his granny found happiness, he will establish there. Maybe working at a shop or as a physician. Then Jk will focus on getting healthy, but since he needs Dan he will search for him, until stalking him in this town, maybe blackmail him since he is in debt, to get Dan back.
 
														
										                                        Time to drop this. There is no development whatsoever. Its the same to worst treatment. We do not have backup story from Jk (that will surely come when he pops his arm) the author is delaying (or building idk) the climax which is the redemption arc but I think even with it the characters personalities are far to gone for them to redeem themselves.  
I really don't know how the author and their editor are comfortable doing this story...I can only save the art, which is top and the initial plot which was cliche from the start, cause the mcs are really bad and one dimensional.
Will see all the updates on socialmedia cause this is really not worth the reading for me. 
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This story has so much value and is incredible. Now I want to see their version but supernatural story. Au story