beta
The read is really fast pace with wonky transitions. I appreciate her not being a child for like 90 chapters but there is a lot of missing pieces to the plot that quickly get explained away. Also, the uncle finally coming to see her when she is older- doesn't make sense. It's a bit all over the place. I will keep reading because let's be real the series is probably ending within the next 20 chapters anyway given how fast the story is going.