beta
It was great at the beginning then became messy later on.
-The duke was confusing too, he gave off unapproachable at first then he's suddenly sweet to the female lead for no big reason. The romance happened too fast, we're not used to this.
- Plus the fact that the red haired friend actually dislikes the female lead, then tomorrow just sends a letter pretending like she didn't just talk smack behind her back with the guy that the female lead absolutely despises. Later saying the female lead owes her an explanation for what happened. (like girl she doesn't owe you an explanation)
-They also didn't do any backstory as to why the female lead is called a "business genius" and leader of underground businesses. It said in the first few chapters that the female lead built the wealth of the family from the ground up but when i read the later chapters, the parents were always busy cause they were always away for business. I wish they told us more about the female lead's business ventures.
-They got married on paper and didn't actually celebrate any actual wedding. Like they signed the papers then the female lead just moved to the north with the male lead the next day. Us readers need to feel the moment, that's why wedding scenes/chapters are important.
-Also they mentioned that the female lead rejected the prince and the male lead wondered why she chose him. Like what's this about?
- Lastly, they keep changing the name/spelling of the female lead's name. I'm getting confused like stick to one name bro.