I read all this in one day so maybe that's why I feel like the pacing is off but.. let's recap. The seme kept harassing the uke and uke rejected him multiple times (that was sexual harassment, period) only to then do a 180 and accept the kisses. That was weird but oh well okay. THEN uke does a 180 AGAIN and goes back to rejecting the seme but suddenly uke DOES A 180 AGAIN AND ACCEPTS IT WILLINGLY. Also the sex scenes were.. weird to say the least, he told him to stop, he couldn't breathe, it hurts, etc and seme didn't even listen, the same way he didn't listen when the uke kept saying he didn't want to be more than friends.
Also I don't mint the mpreg because it's actually true, it's called intersex
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