Aaah, the concept was nice. But hmmm, also the "teaching the nightlife" was goods too like to hundreds of things I've read so far, this one "teaching smoke" only continued. From the other story, as I remember, they try smoking but didn't like it so they just drop it but in here, Sumiura embraced it. Plus, if a reader didn't know better, one might think this is one thick love triangle to break with. Sumiura sees them as a different person, yes he smelled the scents of cologne and cigarettes but later in, he only remembers Enaga's scent on the bed. Hmm, how wonder if Enaga and Ai's voice were really different?? Like he really went to that extent?? Plus, there's just some familiarity sense when. You meet the same person, that you perceived as different, like you can feel the presence of one to another. He's been touched by Ai and he touched Enaga so I think what I am saying is, since the author already gave out them as being same person yet Sumiura doesn't know it, it would be nice if Sumiura can make a simple observation about Enaga's and Sumiura's hand like something that can link to each other?? Well, something like that. Just to build up Sumiura's reactions to the possible revelations, and to build up the reader's imaginations too. Well, that's just for me. I mean, this 3chaps lacks details. The author showed a picture in general. 2311240058
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