8/10! I liked this story a lot, The pacing to me was a little off but I enjoyed it all the way through. The seme was adorable, and I saw him as a golden retriever type, and as for the Uke I thought he was more cat like.
I loved the unrequited love the uke had for the manager of the store, it felt real and relatable. The manager is a good character as well, he's very likable and I think that's because he is an understanding person.
The story starts off with our uke outside of the gym being a typical salesman, he's falling behind his coworkers due to his lack of clients, the manager points out a man who has been staring at him, seeing this, our uke approaches him and advertises his service. This man is our Seme, who is similar to a big round dumpling, he's BEYOND adorable.
He agree's and shortly after he asks the uke for a favor, if he's able to lose weight and achieve his dream body then he want's to go on a date with him! He reluctantly agrees and that's where our story starts.
Their relationship is sweet and desirable. Also the Smut is GREAT, I loved their chemistry, and I think the writer experimented with some situations involving sex, which I admired.
Worth a re-read.
Love Gym