It's a little fucked up. LOLLL
surprisingly the dialogue was really good. The smut was good in retrospect as well. HOWEVER THE STORY!
A man who is supposedly average, finds piercing's as a way of being unique.
Tongue, Chest, Neck, Even his no no square eventually.
He admits to his now lover that these piercings were made by his past lovers during "the deed" The seme is upset by this seeing as how he just agreed to have his tongue pierced by him during sex.
He leaves him explaining he couldn't go on with the jealously he felt
The Uke tries to get ahold of him and eventually shows up to his (job/House?)
He askes to essentially stretch the piercings to a bigger guage and even offers to let the seme give him the prince albert piercing. So he does. The seme thinks that since he's expanded the sizes over the past piercings his lover had from his ex's it was fine. Especially seeing as he pierced the most sensitive part of his boyfriend.
INSANE SHIT RIGHT?! It's unlike anything I've read. It's very unique but again it's only a oneshot and it's perculiar.
8/10 maybe a 7.8/10
Piercing Hole