ALisAnimeLover's manga / #Memory Loss(4)

It's... okay. Not as heart wrenching as i wanted it to be. It was funny when he finally realized that the one he was all soooo jealous of was himself, all this time. 5.8/10 I'm reading too much tragedy/drama/amnesia mangas that I'm starting to have higher-than-needed standards XD

Um... Yeah.. Shit ending. I get that he's supposed to be great for forgiving him. But no. He's a fucking traitor and it seems like you just forgave him cuz of stockholm syndrome. As seen before. Ahhhh. Shit. 3 or 2/10

The story is a bit predictable and cliche, but I like the characters. I love how the seme took actions to stop himself knowing that he has no self-control (also with the help of his big bro). And I love the moment the uke fell in love with the seme - the seme's words were very considerate saying "It's okay to be down." and such. Like damn. That's an important pov that most people forget. 7 The extra story was... too fast. Well, it's a one-shot. 4

Why did the fatty stay thin? Or is he on a diet? Like others have said, the ending was rushed. The puppet suddenly changed personality in a span of few pages (from wanting to graduate and betraying everyone to not wanting to kill the others to to graduate. I honestly get the vibe that it was all in his plan since the last line of those who helped the MCs was "we're here to follow X's (the puppet) wishes to save you" (non-verbatim) as if everything was premeditated. But the execution certainly didn't show any of that from the puppet's side (as mentioned, it just looked like he had a 360° personality change (yes, 360, not 180 lol. 2 turns)). The ending also never explained how everything that happened happened (lol, sorry poor English), just that it was ~reality~. There wasn't a build-up on the teacher's side (the teacher himself and his coworkers) on who they are, why they're doing this, etc, so it's just... surprise mathafaka (which came off bland since it wasn't given enough focus). Not to mention, the motivation behind everything doesn't make sense at all (*heavier spoilers in the midst of all the spoilers I spouted* so the goal was to make a perfect human, why take random people's body parts? Pretty sure the twins don't have a perfect body since they were poor, the fatty would probably have unhealthy organs, the head/face of the hacker is useless and his brains/intelligence has more worth, a dick is just a dick (or does he have an anaconda? Lmao)). I'm pretty convinced this was meant to be longer, but got axed so it had to be rushed. Still, I'm glad to see everyone had a happy ending (the rapist kinda got off way too easily though; after all, a common trope in shoujo (whether bl or straight) is that a person who got raped/harassed by their lover suffers from doormat syndrome who forgive their lover easily; and no, that isn't Stockholm, that's just poor writing to finish off the arc fast)). And yeah... There's a bit of bromance between the puppet and one of the characters. I guess it can be considered self-cest since the puppet has the **** of the other. Wahaha All the problems could probably be solved if the epilogue was longer tbh (lil explanation here and there). But oh well, manga industry sucks so the author was most likely forced to rush the story.