“weird sex faces” as a tag is so funny. wish there wasnt rape in the first chapter and instead just an enemies to lovers story cause i really like some of the scenes of the first half with them together. also wish there wasnt the “blonde guy (forgor his name) keeps harassing people that even remotely look like hound” because thats so much spacr for sometjing else. same thing when it implies that all mutants fall in love with him because that just makes it all
so meaningless, that ttheyre incapable of yhe choice, omegaversing the story frfr. anyway i literally dont count the first chapter it doesnt exist.
tbh half of this i imagine doesnt exist. completely different story in my head. if only the first “drunk” scene, the one right when they see each other in suits, and the one where they wake up next to each other and lozzo points a gun at shion, were the only scenes to exist along with a completely different story in between then i would be okay. like this had such good potential like how couldwrite such good tension and then put the other bs in here (rape, consent, cheating, cheating while drunk gag, molestation by older dude, weird mutant storyline)
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