10$offriedchicken's manga / #children(1)

7/10 It had a lot of potential, I liked it a lot. But the problem with these mangas are that they are too short, nothing gets fully explained or fully developed. The ending was a bit lacking, like it was cute how they were finally basically a family tgt at the end. I mean since the beginning, the uke (forgot his name) rlly held it tgt and tried to make them a family even with his failing music career, at the end it worked out even with their weird we are not your dad, we are adults, and we are all cohabitants. Tbh bc this kid is so different from other kids, maybe this is for the best? I don't think this kid cares for closure so as long as they are taking care of her right it should be fine right? And like these guys are in their mid 20s and were just like thrown a kid, they are MEGA new to this, I cant blame them. Someone said the kid was kinda of an afterthought and i agree, they didn't really go into detail as to why she acts like that. It's clear her mother neglected her, but other than that what made her feel that way. Or maybe thats just her attitude and there js nth to explain lol. Their romance was cute but it was so short, they were more focused on talking about their pasts which is a big part of who they are but I would like to see more progress on their relationship and not just at the end yk. And i feel like we really need a continuation bc uke still pities the ex so much and i need to see him get over that so he can work on himself and his career. And yeah his career, when i saw that he just quit it kinda was like omg why he do that so i would like to see what he gon do now after. And the seme as well cus his yakuza shit is gone. They lowkey focused on that too much, shouldve been more gay sex BAHAHAHA jk jk. Idk I think I just need more of this for closure. The kid doesnt need to know who the father is but I do. I think they are suited to be parents but atleast they are trying and that kid is so nonchalant about everything it might help? Idk but I need more is all i'm saying. I like the art, characters so segsy