pyschosimp's manga / #smut(29)

did feel like jaehyuk could have grovelled much more at the ending, then again ig he was always portrayed as a calm and somewhat patient person that didn't considerably force himself that much onto yeon oh outside of physical sex. areas of the story definitely could have developed but overall i was obsessed w their shyness and the ART AND BODY ANATOMY. I will never get over the muscles (esp the back muscles omfg) and the hip area the lower torso omfg evth honestly i j love how its not super bulgy and more realistic in comparison to some other art styles, slender and simple yet elegant somehow ugh i j love Eeej's art style it's a shame she's only got two romantic works and her others are short rape stories... her art style really suits stories with mature romance and emotions and drama. the historical side story could have definitely been told after we got a decently longer modern side story continuation bc i think it probs threw lots of readers off

I'VE NEVER FELT SO STAISFIED READING A CHAPTER WHEN IF INSIHED CHAP 94 UGH yh the tension in this story ugh the build up and the yh abs and beautiful body art im just such a sucker for good art and body proportions and the fucking hip muscles ughhh... anyways my only criticism is i really liked hansoo like omg when i realised the kim dude was eyeing him up i literally got scared, but anyways i wish hansoohad a more realistic adult-like maturity about him. yh my geenral criticism is i alw hate childish logic so whenever yoon jay throws those phrases around like 'you're mine' 'should i rly have to mind you when it's you own mistake you got hurt' 'yh i gave myself the right to throw all your shit out' like if this was a real man ik he'd get slapped like wtaf. anyways tbh that's a criticism for all bl out there that includes lins like that tbh, so honeslty technically no criticsm for this story specifically!!! oh wait actually tbh the end with evth just happening at the same time after he wakes up from his coma was a bit rushed, but yh no i rly liked this story, i like the build up and the whole arc where he realises he's found a reason to live and i feel like the whole Memory movie plot is supposed to mimic Yoohan's own life, wish i understood the metaphor better but anways this review is allover the place but basically 5/5 absolute best read for a while no srs complaints apart from i need to see yoohan spent on the bed more (refer to chap 80 )

rly good smut uhm in terms of the story it was kinda ass icl like i was a bit confused when it said he liked him since high school like where tf did that come from and there was like no explanation as to why the uke j succumbed to him and why th euke previously went out w all those women... but uh rly good smut

one of my less favourable 5 star reads, but it was still like so cute and i loved the whole redemption of their love like awww, uhmm also their smut was rly good too

i like this author

VERY lewd uke omg, nothing complicated, one of those simple reads + cute (tho im never gonna be able to not be weirded out by this like obsessed fan trope)

it's just not really on the same level as my other 4 star reads, but it's a good 3 star read. pushy seme never goes hard for me tho and they srsly ukeified the older guy. they were rly cute tho!

when this started off i was rly hopeful yoojoon wouldn't be a pushover uke because of how he was introduced as this killer w noir vibes, but then the story took a 180 degree turn with his character and he turned into this big eyed uke who suddenly was okay with being roped w this random ass buffalo jaeha guy. dont even get me started w how much i fucking hate the whole 'met as a children' thing, just leave their childhoods out of it, it makes perfectly without the author trying to conjure in some sort of magical fate detsiny between these two, besides that idk this plot is decent, ur avg mafia infiltration plot ig, at least its not half assed. I have to say the smut in here is hot, it's not too graphic, but the artist needs to work on their body proportions, they looked rly good in the old art style shown in the creator's note but within the actual story i cannot stop comparing jaeha to a buffalo. wouldn't call this story ass yet, it just feels like it's ur average korean mafia bl though. can't wait for the rest of s2 though. omg also one more thing, why did he not question who the chairman was when he just randomly took him in as his own son???? gosh idk i just feel liek as a kid ur kind of aware of who ur family is on good terms with, or at least ud check w ur other family members, and in this case why did nobody tell him to be wary if family member also found it weird the dad's enemy took the son in, these are quite generic plotholes tho in these kinda stories, hopefully s2 is slightly better

a good 3 star read: cute, simple and spicy