It's alright, I feel like the alpha wasn't apologetic enough for dragging his lover's dead partner so much at the start, but when he said he'd never ask him of the ring that kinda made up for it. I kinda dk what else to say apart from the transition between the omega being unable to accept his love -> being able to accept him as a lover is kind of quick but yh the part when he described what it felt like to break his bond was heartbreaking. I don't really like fated pairs tho like this, I prefer when you work to love each other.
2ban-me no Alpha