I ain't gonna lie it's hard to understand. I can't actually get what they're meaning most of the time but I get the general idea and I love it.
It's almost embarrassing how much I cried with the Alec Ch, but it's all starting to make sense now
Okay. It's a bit of a mess in terms of execution but it got so many things I'm interested in. It's something I know I want to read cause time to time I want a story bout two masculine dudes getting over their past and falling for eachother even if they resist or deny it. I'm always in for some trauma, even more if the aesthetic is great as this one.
The previous work was more of an introduction to this one, it was so mid and cliché in comparison. Good thing I gave it a chance cause this is so much more of my type
Someone said that they are domestic and that's how side story should be and I couldn't agree more. They're so in love and horny for eachother, it's lovely.
Ugh these extras. The one where they go walking after sex got me butterflies. They're so domestic, so in love, so connected with eachother. I mostly go through a sex scene without much attention, but here I was so catched. The way he rubbed as a cat, the communication and the eye contact, I love it so much. Also, showing them having a walk and dealing with health issues is adorable, that's my kind of happy ending. I don't give a f if they still have sex after all this time, I wanna know if the life together is working nicely for them, if they like to share these simple routines, daily activities and annoying issues, I wanna know if they have come to know eachother so well as here is shown
Re-reading so soon? Yep. I no longer remember the main story but I don't feel the need to go back. I did read a few ch to remember Damon behaviour, but I remember not liking that story even half as much as this one. I don't find that confusing now, even though there are clearly some weird translations at times. But dude how this is. Damon being the most sentimental it's a fcking smash while having Colton realize his feelings sooner even though he was the most reluctant at first.
The sex it's unbelievable good. it's a great teaser of their dynamic.
Cuando leía el desarrollo de Damon y su crisis en mi cabeza empezó a sonar en loop: todas las promesas de amor se irán contigo, me olvidarás me olvidarás... Y siento que era la musicalización perfecta
Más me vale que un día (noche mejor) alguien se sienta locamente atraído por mí mientras le pido fuego para un pucho porque sino me mato
Mamita cómo me gusta ver a hombres maduros enredarse en sus sentimientos. Lo embelesado que quedó Colton me enternece mucho a la vez que la descripción que se hace de Damon me fascina (cuando habla de ser tan delicado como sus piezas (que a la vez traslucen su esencia romántica) pero con un carácter fuerte y libre)
"Alec have taken a liking to you" DAMN RIGHT HE WAS THE ONE THAT DID IT. Such a talker
Dios lo amo, el chabón entró en confianza y ahora me hace sonrojar con lo bueno que es chamuyando. Cómo se le burla del rut
A partir de los capítulos +30 son todos preciosos. CH 39 es el de Alec y es tan bonito, mi vida
Se siguen encontrando y cada vez es con tanta intensidad
Now I really want to sex with a smoke.
Two of my favourite works (shutline and semantic error) appearing at the a.n let me know I'm in the right place
Lo hermoso que es Colton por favor, muevo las patitas cada vez que sonríe el hdp. Y con el tiempo solo se pone más bueno
La primera vez que la leí describí la ejecución como enquilombada, porque realmente se hacía complejo entender los recuerdos en combinación a la historia en transcurso como desconocida a la historia. Como segunda lectura tuvo sentido mucho más rápido y se hizo claro e interesante el recurso temporal, pero eso solo evidencia que no es una lectura amigable al incursionador en cuanto a su estructura. Eso es lo único que puedo decir para defender mi primer comentario. Sí sentí que fue algo que mejoró paulatinamente.
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