New uploads were put up for most of the chapters so the translations are fine now!
The pacing is a little slow and the flow was very staggered in the BEGINNING- all the encounters and transitions to the next arc seemed forced and the characters are pretty stereotypical (except for the fox bois we love them). Biggest complaint: FL is SUCH a Mary Sue I literally had to take a break from reading because I was getting too frustrated by her naivety and the author’s need to make her “pure” and “better than” FL has a holier than thou narrative making it just really annoying to read sometime and it feels like a lack of growt and many times makes moments super unrealistic it takes you out of the story with how “pure/good” she is.
This whole story has a lot of potential tho, I like the concept and character tropes it just slightly lacks in some important storyboarding aspects and character depth.
Update: at chapter 97 shit is getting boring to read the FL is too OP beyond reason might drop soon, don’t even remember how I used to like this story so much in the beginning. The pacing is getting staggered again wondering if the author just isn’t good at story-lining
The Archmage's Daughter