Whose Baby is it?
I Became the Mother of the Strongest Demon Lord's 10 Children in Another World.
The Archmage's Daughter
New uploads were put up for most of the chapters so the translations are fine now! The pacing is a little slow and the flow was very staggered in the BEGINNING- all the encounters and transitions to the next arc seemed forced and the characters are pretty stereotypical (except for the fox bois we love them). Biggest complaint: FL is SUCH a Mary Sue I literally had to take a break from reading because I was getting too frustrated by her naivety and the author’s need to make her “pure” and “better than” FL has a holier than thou narrative making it just really annoying to read sometime and it feels like a lack of growt and many times makes moments super unrealistic it takes you out of the story with how “pure/good” she is. This whole story has a lot of potential tho, I like the concept and character tropes it just slightly lacks in some important storyboarding aspects and character depth. Update: at chapter 97 shit is getting boring to read the FL is too OP beyond reason might drop soon, don’t even remember how I used to like this story so much in the beginning. The pacing is getting staggered again wondering if the author just isn’t good at story-lining
Kiraide Isasete