AssassinBeta's manga / #Mage(4)

New uploads were put up for most of the chapters so the translations are fine now! The pacing is a little slow and the flow was very staggered in the BEGINNING- all the encounters and transitions to the next arc seemed forced and the characters are pretty stereotypical (except for the fox bois we love them). Biggest complaint: FL is SUCH a Mary Sue I literally had to take a break from reading because I was getting too frustrated by her naivety and the author’s need to make her “pure” and “better than” FL has a holier than thou narrative making it just really annoying to read sometime and it feels like a lack of growt and many times makes moments super unrealistic it takes you out of the story with how “pure/good” she is. This whole story has a lot of potential tho, I like the concept and character tropes it just slightly lacks in some important storyboarding aspects and character depth. Update: at chapter 97 shit is getting boring to read the FL is too OP beyond reason might drop soon, don’t even remember how I used to like this story so much in the beginning. The pacing is getting staggered again wondering if the author just isn’t good at story-lining

10/10 story but FL is lowkey so dumb??? Like she’s smart in the story but because she’s reincarnated she’s living like she’s not actually a character in the story like wtf bro no personal connections at all she just succumbs to playing her part but also not dying??? SPOILERS Literally has the best father figure on the planet and she refuses to be adopted by him or call him dad despite her original family literally sending her to die. And not realizing that the ML wants to be close with her??? Wtf.

Don’t let the art turn you off this is lowkey SO GOOD