The story started alright, but the ending was kind of bad. Not even because of the twist ending or anything, just out of character for the protagonist. It just seemed like a forced dead dove ending when nothing in the story was leading to it (outside of Rose's affairs, obviously). I really don't have much to critique on this one, like most of their works, its just smut and beautiful art. The story could have been a lot better. Sadly, I do think Bad Thinking Diary might have been the author's one hit wonder, because the stories they have been putting out since then have been kind of poor.
Lily of the Valley