Other than the blatant s.a and grape from the creatures, like the oni and stuff, this isn't tooooo bad. But don't get me wrong, it's not good either. It stupid and funny at some points, reallyy ridiculous overall so there's that. I won't read it again honestly, there's nothing about it for me to want to...well except maybe the hot characters...they are prettyyy hwattt...oop- anwaysss, 4.2/10
Ore Miko!