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Forging Rock'n Roll

Complete | Jangson | 2019 released
2025-03-25 07:12 marked

Kimi no Tabegoro

Complete | Yoriko | 2000 released

Second work from this author so... *edit: it's the third!* I'm gonna be nice and rant this one as a 3/5 It wasn't bad but there's some frames that seems like something was missing..? Idk like some kind of "jump" The moment uke "decided" about his feelings was weird but they're a cute couple and maybe it was cause it was planned as a short story so they missed some interesting points/topics/stories there (the uke feelings realization, the friend -BUT I love author didn't went to the "also inlove of uke" part, he's just a good friend- and the more interesting the uke putting limits at "first" -i mean with the kiss)