Vegapunk Evil (Lilith)'s manga / #oneshot(3)

I love the style, but the translation is so bad. I'd love to read a version of this where there isn't painfully obvious missing depth.

Hated the male lead tbh. I expected a bit more push and pull in this story than there was. When the giver of one-sided love is a very kind pushover and the person on the receiving end turns up their nose at every act of kindness with no semblance of banter or chemistry, the relationship is so uncomfortable to watch. Him finally realizing that she cares for him when she's been saying and showing him that the whole time becomes all the more infuriating when he decides that the gesture to her he will make is "teaching her" how to be more like him. Oh you're taking her to a baseball game, but the "right way" this time because you like baseball? What about her interests? All we know by the end of this story about her interests is that she likes him. He doesn't ask. He doesn't try. He leads her on and talks shit behind her back to his buddies. He doesn't even read her letters. I wish she would've gone for his friend instead.

Say what you will about the official jjba spinoff material, I'm just glad the Jolyne ecchi spinoff is softcore yuri porn. Also Fujiko is adorable and the oneshot has a lot of really cute panels. Plus blatant JolyMes bait. What is there to dislike? It's not like it's canon.