taruchi's manga / #Manly uke(3)

I'm conflicted on this one. Big fan of the dynamic, but I have a problem with their first time, specifically the scene where the uke tells the seme to stop because it hurts and then punches him and bro still doesn't stop. Like. Erm. And then it's basically blamed on him going into heat?? Ik he feels bad for what he did but idk it rubs me the wrong way

This was really good, the second half especially was so cute and I really enjoyed the development of their relationship. I don't have much to say honestly but it's worth the read!

DNF: I REALLY tried to push through and finish this but I hated it so much I dropped it with 4 chapters to go. First of all I hate the dynamic of the couple, that whole guy/kid he practically raised trope is a major no from me, especially when the older guy is like "he's just a kid!" or "I raised him, I can't be doing this!" during intimate scenes, it's just gross. I'm gonna brush over the multiple other tropes I don't like that this included but I am going to mention how fucking manipulative and shitty the seme is. Like I genuinely wish he had died when he went into the gate I'm gonna be so fr, I HATE his ass. The uke went through a lot of shit because of him and was quite literally a cripple for YEARS because he refused to let anyone heal his leg. Major piece of shit. The art is nice enough but the expressions are pretty bland and emotionless most of the time, though that's a personal peeve of mine so whatever