Writing A Book

I just honestly need someone to revise a letter that's due tomorrow. Simple critique on grammar and word choice is very appreciated. I have no friends to ask this favour pls help-   2 reply

I hate eggs, I can’t eat them without eating them with something else to mask the flavor. I also hate eating eggplant and tofu and red onion, but I’m able to stomach and eat everything just by forcing myself to it and act normally and not disgusted.   reply

Steak, porkchops, and ribs I kinda wish I did like them, since most people do, but they just taste, smell, and look utterly disgusting and unappetizing to me. It’s not a thing with meat/the fact that it’s animal, since I like corned beef, ham, turkey, chicken, seafood, and etc.. I also hate how people talk about steak and stuff too, like when ......   2 reply

Something that I absolutely fucking hate about thai bl books/shows in general is that the main character would always say " I'm not gay I only like him." OH MY FUCKING GOD! why do all fucking authors in bl love that stupid ass line to use ever time. Anyways besties you guys should watch until we meet again. Now that is a good written bl series to w......   1 reply