Gemme ur opinion :3

So , im making a comic , I’ve been lazy a little so I’ve been skipping somedays , im kinda insecure bout it , some of my friends encouraged me , i want ur opinio about it I’ll give you the intro ( sry if my English is weird it isn’t my first language )

-Ok , its about a girl called F , her bloodline is cursed , she was took in a laboratory as a child with her mom , to turn her to the ultimate being , by using her mothers blood , but it failed and the mom died , she got some power and a split personality
The split personality is called shinzou , which means heart in Japanese
She is so evil , she is the main cause of the curse
So F kills people when she’s shinzou , so she was always chased as wanted , she was so depressed since it caused her mothers death and it wasn’t her fault
But shinzou would go and spread the cursed bloodline
Her first victim was a chinese girl , her name is Jay
And the second victim was marco , a Mexican boi
She had a sister called nerrisa , she was found on the street , they adopted her
But after they were kidnapped , she assumed nerrisa died , so the story is about them looking for cure and to get rid of shinzou


I’ll show u the main characters in the answers :3