Would ya'll read this? This is like, an entire mini essay
Okay so I was thinking of making a webcomic... So it's basically a romance, yaoi, shounen-ai, sci-fi, tragedy....
Description: Fate brought them together, but time tore them apart. The only thing that remained was the field of white, almost cotto like flowers.
So it's gonna be called cotton field flowers.
A further description:
The characters are: Rausani and Andera. They met each other over and over again in certain periods of time, in different bodies and circumstances. But no matter what, they would always meet. (now this is where I had two different I idea's and I'm gonna show ya'll both of them)
1. Then, they once never meat. This is where a war was caused. The they didn't meat again... And again and again. Plague, war, catastrophe's, everything happened in their time apart. And they had no clue they were the cause of it. They were like yin and yang... No, they were yih and yang. They balanced eachother out, they were the other other half... Without that fulfilment, they could They weren't even aware of each other's existence. But then, one time, for the very last time, they were re-united. Rausani remembered everything, but Andera didn't. He mad eit his personal mission to remind him. But while there were things that Rausani remembered, there were thing's that Andera needed to forget. Andera remembered everything... Even thing's that Rausani did not. He remembered the most gruesome, traumatizing part's of his past. But, there were the nice moment's to. Despite what the other new, that the other did not, they still tried to make it work. But, then they both remembered something that neither one of them was supposed remember. (imma cut this short cuz now it's just long and I feel like I'm rambling, so basically they either die, or turns out Rausani is a figment of Andera's imagination, OR they both die together in a field of cotton flower's while trying to run from the past (idk how but I'll make that make sense in the actual story)
2. Time travel has been invented and they both keep making mistakes and traveling through time to change and fix them. They grow further but closer each and every time until one of them doesn't return. Andera, was lost in time. Rausani tried to fix this, but, each time he did he would just make it worse. Thing's began to change that weren't meant to change. Then, in the process, someone was killed.... Who You may ask? Rausani's mother was killed in the war... As he slowly began to fade in time, he began to think about rausani... He changed everything now.. With out him there with Andera and with out Andera there for him... Why was he doing all this? Then, through a blessing, or through curse, he was reunited with Andera... But with a limited time left, and nothing to back up his claim's, he failed... But, one thing that stayed the same each and every time... Was the field of cotton flowers. He had no more time left, so he went their, as a dying wish. He had always wanted to be buried in this field of cotton flower's. He closed his eye's but heard a distant shouting, it was Andera... He had tear's in his eye's ad scar's on his leg's knee's and arm's. HE had the eye's of a man who was not going to give up. But, he felt himself slowly grow weaker but, they were able to embrace each other one last time...
If you made it this far, thank you. Also, I realize that I could make this much, much sadder, soooo, yeah, in the actual thing;s I might make it sadder. But, feedback! I would like feedback, also sorry if there are any grammar or spelling errors in here.
