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Do you want feedback on problems with things like verb tense and grammar? Eg. “manages to lift his head just a bit. letting his upturned face catch the raindrops.” Has no capital at sentence beginning, uses present tense v past tense (you started in past tense) and unusual punctuation mid sentence. So this would be better if it was like: “H......   reply
18 04,2021
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