once upon a time there lived a dragon who had kids with a dog, the dog had died due to natural causes and mother dragon was left all alone. When she saw that one of her kids resembled the love of her life she decided she would marry her own son, the had many many kids as the years passed by. The end.
Well first, there was no detail to the characters, no depth. Maybe you should've made it longer and made the dead dog not a dead dog anymore. -71727277282/10 reply
