Constructive criticism: For dialogues, you can add something like “he gasped” , “he cried”, “he yelled” , if you add the same sentence (whatever you call it) it’ll seem bland. You can change the “his self” to “himself”. Your and you’re are two different things, with “your” you add it in a sentence like this: “your ......   1 reply
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