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Immediate sex is never a way to start a chapter thanks i do NOT want the sfx "fwop fwop" to be the first thing i see   2 reply
22 08,2023
Please please please please PLEASE hire and editor. Or at least have a second opinion to help you organize the pacing and character continuity.   reply
22 08,2023
IF YOU'RE PLANNING TO WRITE A CHARA'S THAT GOES THROUGH SA. WRITE IT PROPERLY. Yes, you can be blunt about it but do it in a wsy thats not offensive. You're not writing a pornhua so grow a pair and do some research. INTERACT WITH FEMALES IN YOUR LIFE IF YOU'RE ADDING A FEMALE CHARA IN AN ACTION NOVEL. YALL CANT WRITE FOR SHIT. Also this is geared ......   reply
22 08,2023
to find a balance between smut and story if youre actually trying to tell a story-- we do not need more 20 chapter smut followed by 1 chapter of actual plot, to the point where the story is hindered and ends up devolving. and yeah i get that sex sells well, but from a story-telling quality standpoint, you need to know when smut is not needed for th......   reply
22 08,2023
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