That was amazing! But I have a few advice for you. 1. Try not to use too unnecessarily complicated words. Eg. You used 'Haemoglobin' instead of simply 'blood'. You could have just used 'blood' instead. It kinda makes the reader lose focus when suddenly a word like that pops up. 2. Put the dialogues in quotation marks. Sometimes, when you don't do t......   reply
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