How should i end my short story?
How should i end my short story. The story basically about this about a girl have to carve 6 god figures out of woods in 6 days or else her head will be taken.
The plot goes like this :
- she went to the woods to take a pictures ? Make a video or maybe for her assignments (still unclear how i want it to goes )
- raining, she took shelter at an abandoned temple. Started playing around in the temple making live etc. And then she sees a god wooden figure, making fun of it , dropped it , causing the figure head to snap.
- she got home , there's a red puss around her neck , got nightmare etc. Meet a shaman , shamna told her to carve 6 god figures in 6 days.
- she can't carve , bcs of her hands tremor (?) Idk . Told the shaman to find a solution, the sahaman agrees, did some kind of ritual, and then the shaman head severed. Meet another 2 shaman same ending for them
- and then meet a shaman near the old temple, there's no other way she have to carve 6 wooden figures.
And then idk how to end it. Please help. Or maybe if there's a plot hole please point it out
I JUST WANT TO PASSED THIS ASSIGNMENTS PLS MY TC IS PRETTY STRICT.
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reveal that she is a lingering spirit. can foreshadow using a camcorder to make the period she comes from older. I feel like making those home videos would be a nice hobby.
she truly is innocent, but doesn't realize that she's gathering those shaman's heads as a replacement for those dolls, or as servants for an evil god. it's an inevitable trick......
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01 06,2024
she slowly managed to poorly carve only 5 figures in time, and then the last 6th figure is the very one that she broke in the first place, that figure god came down on earth to punish her but somehow falls in love w her in the process idk
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01 06,2024
she falls in love with a shaman who is cursed himself but she doesnt know that. he 'helps' her carve 5 shamans, but also makes her fall in love with him in the process only to take advantage of her. the only way he can get rid of his own curse is to pass it on, he then passes it onto her whilst they are making the 6th shaman and she ultimately dies......
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01 06,2024
So 3 people have died after she had met them one-on-one? No way the cops aren't after her.
She carves 5 figures but gets arrested before she manages to do the 6th. She's held in jail pending investigation, but when the cop goes to check on her in the morning, all he sees is a small wooden figure that resembles the girl: she couldn't carve the 5th ......
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01 06,2024
