Telling opinions on possible webtoon

I have been working on this webtoon/manga and have finished almost the first chapter soon, I have redrawn everything 6 times so far lol.

Just thinking if there is anyone who would be kinda interested to glance through and say if something was weird or lacked something!

You can send me a message here or Instagram, Sni666 (I don't post art there but use it to communicate and stuff). Nothing too big, I'm not sure if it will ever be published but just need some commentaries, etc to calm my nerves and be more confident through fixing some problems I'm not able to see due to working on this so much.

Thank you very much! (●'◡'●)ﾉ