I’ll go first: the fan-fic had everything I could ever want in the tags, the writing in the first couple paragraphs was spectacular and then the writer noted that the guy was wearing a choker. It was—if I remember correctly—a choker that ‘death’ gave to him when he became the master of it.
Another one that just came to mind was when I was playing mystic messenger for the first time about three years ago; the guy I liked was Zen and I would wake up at obscene hours to chat with him. Things were grand. I completed everything and finally got to the scene where he was riding his bike somewhere—probably to see me—only to see that man’s rat tail fluttering in the wind behind him. I did not know this man had a bloody RAT TAIL. Every time I saw him it was from the front. Anyways I dropped it after that.
I couldn’t stand the accent that the characters had.
also, when they twinkify a twink even more and make them look like a literally child getting rid of any masc features they once had reply
