Does this look any better?

Cruchy_rollers Cruchy_rollers 2026-02-02 01:00:34 About question
I tried adding more colors and stuff, I’ll add the light source later but this is just purely for shading


I tried using smaller strokes to but mgg ruins the quality so badly it’s hard to see

Edit: this is it now


I also need help on clothes cause ts looks horrible

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Azusa February 2, 2026 5:14 am

Yes, it's definitely better :D
However, there are a few things that don't make much sense anatomically and wouldn't take too much effort to fix... wish I could just send a picture because explaining everything with words is such a pain.
One of those things is that your shading for the right boob starts a bit too high. The distance to the collarbones should be roughly the same for both boobs, so the I'd put the shading line between body and her right boob underneath the dress. Talking about that shading line, I'd blend it in a bit because the transition between body and boobs is usually very smooth.
Also, you could solve the problem with the short upper arm by adjusting her left collarbone and angling it higher. I'm too tired to keep explaining. Gng sleep for now. Tell me if you'd be interested to see a pic of what I mean and if you know how I can upload one without opening a whole new thread/question/whatever it's called here.
Nighty.

Azusa February 2, 2026 5:20 am

Wait are you working digitally? I kinda just assumed. But if you're working traditionally on pen and paper, it'd be harder to even make small changes ( ̄∇ ̄")

Cruchy_rollers February 2, 2026 5:30 am

You can send a photo of you want!! It’s just not possible to do in replies you just have to make a whole new thing lmao. And yes I am working digitally :p

Gojosbigshlong February 2, 2026 2:32 am

Damn crunchy kun, didn't know u were this talented! Its soo good

Cruchy_rollers February 2, 2026 2:40 am

Ty Gojosbigshlong chan, Im glad you like it!!(≧∀≦)

pigglypoof February 2, 2026 2:23 am

I think the changes definitely helped. The skin looks more alive now!

Cruchy_rollers February 2, 2026 2:25 am

YAYYYYY

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