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Yeah I think the plot kinda too fast. It doesn't let the reader to empathisize with the character when they fight or when they are away for years.
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Yeah I think the plot kinda too fast. It doesn't let the reader to empathisize with the character when they fight or when they are away for years.
It's good but I think it would be better if the pages or the story was paced differently. Not that I'm complaining tho! Just thought that this could work well with 2 volumes. El is so cute and the story in itself is cute (▰˘◡˘▰) A fluffy seme is always a yes for me