Hiatus...

Sakata Ginko January 29, 2021 3:27 pm

Going on hiatus is the best decision for her right now. The plot was really going downhill since the kidnapping as it was the most anticlimactic writing she has done. The adding of Min's petty vendetta against Seungho is not a good take. It would have played better if it was implicit and unfolded later but we should only see how she will pull it off.

It's time for her to give some space to develop her characters through their past and motives, especially Seungho. That will give room to the reader to either empathize with them or disregard their behaviour. She could also go to add the drama in all the politics revolving around Seungho's family and bring back In-hun in the government to give to add some spice. There're many things that could be done with PotN to make it really groundbreaking.

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    MahirF January 29, 2021 4:16 pm

    So far it's been drama over drama over violence over drama over violence... but the merch stuff are all about fluff and love and joy. I am here from the beginning and I will stick around till the end... but the fact we don't get to see NK smiles at all is scary af. I don't even mind SH's craziness. I can cope with it. But give NK a break still. She obviously likes portraying him miserable. Always crying and being abused. It's annoying and it became even boring.

    96neko January 29, 2021 6:31 pm

    Lmao what? She’s taking a break to rewrite because people think it’s a good idea to harass her. She shouldn’t have to change the plot to make people happy. At all. The way you think you know the plot better than the author is hilarious. Write your own story then.

    Sakata Ginko January 29, 2021 9:03 pm
    Lmao what? She’s taking a break to rewrite because people think it’s a good idea to harass her. She shouldn’t have to change the plot to make people happy. At all. The way you think you know the plot bett... 96neko

    And your point is? Did I say I know what is good about her story? That's my take on what I think about the story so far and what to expect. What I say won't change anything about what how she has set her writing. It's like nowadays it's forbidden to have a point of view.

    "Write your own story then" is the most cliché sentence someone could write when they do not understand what a person is trying to convey. If you think I'm on the harassing side, sorry to burst your bubble, I'm not interested in social networks so I'm not informed about that.

    Sakata Ginko January 29, 2021 9:20 pm
    So far it's been drama over drama over violence over drama over violence... but the merch stuff are all about fluff and love and joy. I am here from the beginning and I will stick around till the end... but the... MahirF

    Whatever ending she comes with won't be satisfying for me if the author doesn't change her approach on the story. Nakyum was happy in the beginning when thinking about In-hun. He can't have that for now as he is still confused about his feelings. He will warm up to Seungho, but that won't be the case for now.

    I think there will be more only to strengthen their relationship. But the author should had also drama to unfold the intricacies between Seungho and his family for example.