Responses
honestly i just come back for the swoon.. I completely agree with your points on the plot though. I do NOT like MC.. he's selfish and I feel like he depends on Zay too much to the point where its scary. Don't even get me started with Zay, she's a mess. Okay, I thought it was super sweet when she cried for his happiness or whatever. But you see, she can't just support every little thing he does.
uhhh, idk i feel like there's something missing here. like, its- idk how to say it but its too plain. rn all the mc do is being a damsel in distress and its annoying. the story seems to be heading nowhere. like, its kinda predictable. the characters are awkward, even the fight scene ；－；idk tho might come back if this gets better i'll be putting this on hold