this story reminds me of what middle schoolers think sex is like and they put together a w...

tocra January 30, 2021 11:15 am

this story reminds me of what middle schoolers think sex is like and they put together a weird story to tell their friends about how sex is and then it just ends up as weird censorship and a story line that’s worse than the author’s anatomy drawing skills *sigh*

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    Bob January 30, 2021 11:34 am

    Honestly I agree like there’s no plot anymore or purpose

    tocra January 30, 2021 1:53 pm
    Honestly I agree like there’s no plot anymore or purpose Bob

    the plot and story would be perfect if they kept them from doing it for a while and actually let the tension build while they try to understand their relationship from hating eachother to potentially loving eachother, like the little funny misunderstandings would have been perfect but idk the story got off track so bad kinda saddens me it had potential.