all in all, the story has a good plot. after all, it's trying to rival the story of Cinder...

shvfya asdfghjkl February 8, 2021 3:09 pm

all in all, the story has a good plot. after all, it's trying to rival the story of Cinderella for having the meanest villain there is.
I'm just quite disappointed with the poor development and lack of substance as the story progress.
its as if I'm reading pitchy patchy threads of scenes measly woven together to end a chapter every chapter.
but I'm still hopeful. it has a promising start. I hope the editorial department could help sensei more in improving the pace, sequence and substance of her manga.

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    BLotaku February 9, 2021 9:25 am

    I highly recommend the novel if you haven’t read it already. It’s so good, and might be able to fill in some of those gaps.

    shvfya asdfghjkl February 9, 2021 10:22 am
    I highly recommend the novel if you haven’t read it already. It’s so good, and might be able to fill in some of those gaps. BLotaku

    oooohh! thanks for giving me the lead!