Yeah, I also thought something felt off . . . I liked the story but I guess it was missing character development (?)
yeah, I also feel it's somehow too fast paced? well, given that it's only a one-shot, it's reasonable to fast pacing everything but.... the main missing point it's probably character development as you said
oh well lmao your username. Are you a kpop fan (too)?
can't go a day without my kpop.
There was something off alright. So much unfulfilled suspense for nothing...
I was expecting a big reveal of some kind at the end, like for example that the seme was somehow manipulating the uke and he'd been stalking him since middle school or had been planning the whole thing from the beginning, or even that he wasn't the real glasses-friend but his evil twin or something... Meh, now I'm kinda disatisfied. -.-
ahh me too. I used to be like that (can't go a day without kpop)
that sounds better than the actual plot haha
I was freaked out when the seme slammed uke's head to wall though
I thought it must be one of those yandere and obsessed seme
but noooooooo
the he become all mushy to uke I can't---
it's quite confusing... something kinda off but it's still not bad I think lol