If you're aiming for the smut, this is gold. But I like good plots and this was a mess. Di...

Luna February 13, 2021 11:45 pm

If you're aiming for the smut, this is gold. But I like good plots and this was a mess. Did I miss something? The twins falling in love out of nowhere kinda made me worried, waiting for a bizarre plot twist. Once I read a manga that was just like this (but no twins, just two friends "falling" for a guy) and at some point they left him all alone! Obviously in the end they were all together, but that left me traumatized I guess. I really like to see the feelings progressing and all that stuff! Can you imagine if this had a better plot and if it wasn't so short? Could have been amazing. But that's just me being annoying and not shutting up my writer side lol ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

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