This story had potential, but it truly is not a stretch to say that this is bad writing. Story is all over the place and the progression doesn't excite the readers at all. The misunderstandings are being dragged and stretched out for no apparent reason even though the solution is really simple. It's not making the audience look forward to read it, but instead dread it because the suffering of having to endure the characters' whack decisions is reaaaal. I am only continuing this because I have already invested time and I need to know how it ends. There are better novels to be serialized but they gave it to this one.
I am truly sorry for being negative but I have to let it out somehow
This story had potential, but it truly is not a stretch to say that this is bad writing. Story is all over the place and the progression doesn't excite the readers at all. The misunderstandings are being dragged and stretched out for no apparent reason even though the solution is really simple. It's not making the audience look forward to read it, but instead dread it because the suffering of having to endure the characters' whack decisions is reaaaal. I am only continuing this because I have already invested time and I need to know how it ends. There are better novels to be serialized but they gave it to this one.
I am truly sorry for being negative but I have to let it out somehow