dropping

sk1911 February 21, 2021 9:27 am

the same reason why i dont read mosy chinses mamhua is the reason why im dropping this.

the main character is written to be perfect and have everything. there is little to no growth. the story is more about the main character displaying her advantages because she went back in time. everything is utterly cliche and predictable. there is no excitement in this story.

did we really think tev wouldnt become an apprentice?

did we really think that she would just summon a low-level being?

did we really think blonde mc wouldnt dance with her?

she is literally the main character of an isekai shounen manga. given the advantage, written to be over powered, and has literally people auto flaunt her at some points. it's bland and tasteless.

the art is also just. no. as an artist myself, i can tell that the artist coming up with the designs of the wardrobe before the body. the male characters' proportions look significantly better than those of the female characters because, for male clothing, the outfit is fit to the skin. for women's garbs, everything is hidden with frills. since the hips are lost, the legs are too long along with the entire dress. the waist is incredibly thin. making it harder for the character to have a average sized bodice. as a result, the top half of her body looks tiny compared to the bottom half. the artist is trying to fit pieces of body onto the clothing instead of the other way around and it's just ridiculous.

that's my piece on this.

if you enjoy the webtoon, keep reading it. im sure it gets better. i just dont care for it.

Responses
    Chichay February 21, 2021 2:08 pm

    I agree with ya.. But Imma still read 2-3 more chapters to see if character development exists in the author's vocabulary lol

    Aiwi February 21, 2021 2:27 pm

    Tbh as an artist myself, I think yhe art on some panels were pretty but most of it is just a huge miss. They make out everything about the character so detailed that its hard for your eyes to rest on one thing. The same thing goes with the background, most panels have a full body art of a character with so many flowers and ornaments that it just looses focus on the character.

    I've always prioritized "less is more" but in this manhwa they thought that the more detailed they put, the prettier it'll be...

    Ok but the proportions tho omg- I know that the art is really pretty but gosh the one on the cover just irks me so much;; Not only is her posture so off, the perspective of it is also incorrect. In this essay I will-