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maybe try other work of the author might give you a better idea of how she write? just a suggestion(▰˘◡˘▰)
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maybe try other work of the author might give you a better idea of how she write? just a suggestion(▰˘◡˘▰)
I felt really disconnected to the story and characters... half the time I don't know what's going on... like how exactly did they start sleeping with each other? It just all happens so randomly!
especially the Ukes, to be easily won and... predictable